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What you see is what you get

Pass us by
Turn your heads
Choose not to see
My masterpiece
I see you
But do you see me?
Beauty of life
Canvas in all form

A contest entry

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  • a59teeth
    May 21
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    i Really like this one very much!! wonderful for this prompt!

    • Banana
      May 22
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      thank you baby...I really liked the prompt a lot ..reminded me of a picture you would take


  • Emmyb gold member
    May 20
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    Great! simple yet powerful. Short yet effective. talented. well done.

    • Banana
      May 20
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      thank you very much..I hope it's not too simple but that's pretty much the way I write...I don't like to get muddled w/ unnecessary words