From the first day
That I saw her
I coulndnt understand
What all the hype was over this girl
She was just so plain
She was just so ordinary
But wait a minute
Why can't I hear her inner voice?
I was sitting at my desk
There was not a seat left in class besides next to me
Poor girl she had to sit next to me
And that's when I smelled her
She was like my personal
La tua cantante
The way she smelled
was so unbelievable to me
I tried not to breathe
As the monster was trying
To get free from within me
He just wanted to taste, she smelled so irrestible
I kept the monster under control
The bell rang what a relief
I couldn't believe that that happened to me
I never thought that could be possible
La tua cantante
She is my own personal singer
Her blood sings me to her
Makes the monster within in me want her
She is my la tua cantante
And I can't live without her
What did you think
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well done
Nice job....good use of descriptive words and good flow. I think my favorite line is the last, but would you mind telling me la tua cantante means....thanks for sharing
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I didn't understand this line: Her blood sings me to her But over-all, great job! Thanks for sharing.
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Well this write has a combination of two books new moon and midnight sun if you have not read them then u won't really understand but thanks for the comment .
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