Clicking stilettos on hard flooring,
Smooth words from pouted lips,
Perfection in the flesh:
--I'm not that girl
Confident walk,
Insightful eyes,
Secretive smile:
--I might be that girl
Clicking fingers on keyboard,
Smooth flow of thoughts to paper,
Perfection... not this time:
--I am this girl
Consume me in any way you can,
Balance my flaws with yours,
Take control when I get lost,
Teach me how to love you.
--Who I need you to be
I may not be that girl,
But I am the girl who needs you;
I am the girl you loves you most.
♥
Author notes
Prompt: Title - I'm not that girl
its personal i guess.
I'm not one of those girls.
Sure I have confidence, I might be pretty
but i don't flaunt it
not much to say really- it speaks for itself (for once 
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I wish i could have done this better... but i hope you like it
constructive criticism is always welcome 
In a list
A contest entry
- Not another prompt contest! by Missa.
400 points, ended June 14, 8 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Any ways i could have possibly make this any better?
Comments
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A sweet write that is well deserving of the Gold! You did a fantastic job on this piece! Thanks for sharing and well done!
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why thank you
its nice when personal writes are good
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sheer poetry
I love stilettoes.I also love this poem please keep writing.I also apreceate the advice for my poem.please excuse my misspelling.
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Thanks so much
And I like giving advice. If there is something else you would like me to read I would love to
your misspellings are excused
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Use the title: "I'm not that girl" ...but I don't know if youre a girl or not...if youre a guy you can use "I'm not that boy" [[sorry I can't see your name. lol]]
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lol ya i'm a girl
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Well, I don't know about that Trea... lol jk jk
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O.o you is a WEIRDO
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Who, me? NEVER!
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