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Soldier Girl

Soldier girl my darling soldier girl

take my love with you as you go across the seas.

Think of me as you are driving you Humvee.

Think of the good times as you're moving

acrossthe sands my darling soldier girl.

My darling soldier girl even though we are far away my love will be your shield.

Soldier girl my darling soldier girl I will wait for you.

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  • Sky Prince Ireland gold member
    May 20
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    Very nice Michael. Filled with so much passion and love. Well done.
    Brian