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Chafe of the Rub




Life is rough  like the scale of fish
on the thin membrane around guarded emotion.
Standing alone avoiding the touch
that might brake down reinforced walls.
Hiding behind said walls,
to protect emotions rubbed raw by life.



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option credit pic: http://paul88.deviantart.com/art/Dark-Object-113554662

37 words.

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  • Reptile Lady gold member
    June 2

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    This is painful and deep
    Talks so many peoples thoughts and language
    Thank you and best wishes
    Julie


  • whitecoffee
    May 29
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    very good

    I like this alot. Much luck in the contest