She is a fasinatingly warped person trapped behind aquamarine eyes.
One who's mind-bound; who weaves patterns of wonderful corruptness into sweet rhyme.
She's balancing on a line of plain social awkwardness and complete outcast; a position most would undoubtedly fear.
Yet, in her mind, being misunderstood is truely a gift, a situation nothing more than unsevere.
Hidden by a flat chest, a skeletal-like appearance and an awkward body stance,
lies an optimistic demon caked in star-crossed love and romance.
In public she mearly flickers. In her mind she glistens like rain;
with such gorry ideas, not even the strictest martyr could sustain.
Life has offered her a posing challenge: "Be beyond normal, and if they do, let the world stare."
Whilst writing a poem about an disturbed cannable stalker she shouts, "I gladly accept your dare!"
Author notes
Option 1 - How do you feel about yourself (I actually went on a lighter note)
A contest entry
- I'm ALIVE! by PsychoAnalysis.
900 points, ended June 13, 9 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
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-Originality (I love original works, no cliche crap here)10/10
-First Impression (What I saw when I looked at it without reading it.)9/10
-Last Impression (What the whole poem did for me)10/10
-Emotion (Did I feel the emotions in the poem?)10/10
-Title (How well the title fit the poem)9/10
-Structure (did it work for the write? Does it look good?)9/10
-Word Choice (Did you use your words properly, and does it fit?)10/10
-Prompt (Did your write fit the prompt(s)?)10/10
This brings your total to: 77/80
This was really good. I liked what I saw, though the structure was a little different for me. Welcome to the finalists. You did great.
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