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Bad Flight

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Dorothy flew to Kansas
her aircraft hit a storm
she grabbed her little ‘Toto”
like everything was ‘norm,
and when the high winds settled
in search of help they went
but only found a broomstick
a wicked witch had sent.

Author notes

picture credit....http://paul88.deviantart.com/art/Dark-Object-113554662

just some of my wierd thoughts on that picture...lolol
I had fun with this

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  • Tqop
    October 16

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    I love the song in the movie Somewhere over the Rainbow. Nice summary of the movie.


    • aboomer silver member
      October 17
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      thank you so much Tqop - I had fun with this one. Glad you enjoyed it.
      blessings

  • Oh hun
    I do like the take and how you created such a wonderful poem.. of The Wizard Of Oz
    Great
    Best wishes
    Julie

  • This is so enchanting! I love that movie even today...this rhymes so well. I enjoyed this little trip!!!


    Az


  • Desire gold member
    May 26

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    Very Clever!!

    Now this is one Brilliant piece based on the image
    Love the rhyme but also the short with sweet verse that which along with it
    Excellent this is Beautiful!!
    Thank You for sharing Your Talent
    Best wishes in the contest
    with love & light~ Desire~*~


    • aboomer silver member
      May 29
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      Thank you so much Desire - glad you enjoyed this.
      It was quick, fun thoughts on my part for that picture.

  • LOL!!! I love the Wizard of Oz!!
    you did the prompt justice
    with this write!

    Thank you for sharing
    best wishes in the contest!!

    ~Pastel

    • aboomer silver member
      May 20
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      thank you so much Pastel - I'm glad you enjoyed this.


  • Heroesrox
    May 19

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    Tee hee! I agree with islekine! The Wizard of Oz is so awesome and your piece is too! Great job, hon! Hope all is well! (P.S. Have you seen Tin Man? The SCIFI channel mini-series re-make of the Wizard of Oz? It's so good!)


    • aboomer silver member
      May 20

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      thank you so much 'Heroesrox' - glad you enjoyed this.
      I haven't caught 'Tin Man' - is it a weekly? If you missed the premier show, is it still easy to follow?


      • Heroesrox
        May 20
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        It was actually a one time thing, but you can pick up on DVD in most stores that carry DVDs. It's really good!


  • islekine gold member
    May 19

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    This is great! lol

    I love the Wizard of Oz! Best wishes in the contest and always! Great rhythm and rhyme!
    write onward!

    • aboomer silver member
      May 19
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      thank you 'islekine' - glad you enjoyed.
      it was my first thoughts....lol...

  • Hrmmm. This is funny but what does it spell lol
    Well good luck to you in the contest best wishes always be well .


    • aboomer silver member
      May 19
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      lololol - no, the poem I am doing for another contest is an acrostic! not this one!...lolol
      thanks Starz - glad you enjoyed this.

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