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Dragon's Fire

Missing image
Concealed in Asian flower rare
forever lost in deep pools
her wanting eyes
whilst soft skin caresses tighter
of passions needs
coiled sensual desires
squeezing free will
of man's heart ensnared
her hold to eternities end
graceful form glides
with ease her love quest
neath full moons bathe
another falls slave
this night
in dragon fires heat.

Author notes

The drawing was done by my daughter when she was a teen several years ago, I sat down and wrote this for it today.

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  • DeJaBlue
    May 19

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    Lovely words to accompany your daughter's talent. It seems to be a family trait Nicely done.


    • Rclane gold member
      May 19
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      I thank you so much for your time in reading and commenting....

  • excellent~

    Reads so soft and beautiful
    Your daughter is indeed talented
    It would make a great tatto
    Hugs
    Susan~~~


    • Rclane gold member
      May 19
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      Thank you for your time in reading and commenting. Yes I have several of her works framed and hung around home. Her sketch drawings are my favorites. I have several free style oil paints also that she has done for me ....mostly Asian women. Yes I'd like the Tat but really wouldn't want to have it covered so my job prohibits it.

  • When I saw the pic, I thought it might be by your daughter. She's very talented...like her dad Soft, sensual words you have penned my friend. Woo hoo


    • Rclane gold member
      May 19
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      Thanks girl......I thought about getting this done as a Tat but haven't done it yet.....

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