I had a little broom, broom car
That reminded me of a bubble
Every time I went out in him
He would always land me in trouble
I'd swear I wasn't speeding
I was going under in actual fact
My little car had it in for me
This was some sort of an attack
Then onetime while out driving
I tried to turn a bend
My little car kept going straight
And cost me hundreds just to mend
My little broom, broom car is gone now
But I am filled with glee
Because I took him out one day
And wrapped him round a tree
Author notes
Written March 13th, 2004
A contest entry
- I Like Driving In My Car by leannewales.
300 points, ended March 18, 2004, 13 entries
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lol that is so cute and funny! good job lol keep it up
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Love he last line! 
A very cute poem about a lovely little broom broom car!
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awww poor lil broom broom!!...nice fun poem..i enjoyed it...nicely done!...thanks for entering...hugs..leanne xxx
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HEHE well done this is such a cute poem...love it you tell a great story keep it up...XX
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HAHA. It sounds like it was time to buy a new car anyway. Very humorous write. Good luck in the contest.
Irene
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Oh my, I d hope you walked away without a scratch..This is so funny, reminds me of that film, with the car called christine........creepy.......take care
sanity.
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