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Tainted Bitter

Kiss me with roses
Lay me to die
Killing me slowly
Sick thoughts in your mind
Take it away
All of this pain
That you've pushed upon me
You monster!
Deep inside you knew it all
How I felt about him
But you stole from me
My pain bleeds out dry
Only to pull me under again
How could you!?
My friend, flesh and blood
My younger sister....
Stabbed me in the back
You wont look me in the eye
I can only wonder what it is you would see there
Are you proud of what you've done?
I'm down and hurt is that what you wanted?
So kill me dear one
End it for me tonight
Because you are my flesh and blood
I cannot put up a fight
You stole it all now make it complete
Gain it all with my defeat

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  • appleey
    September 24
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    I'm sorry bt WOW!!!I can feel the pain... awesum write


  • Afe-la
    September 3
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    well written, the flow is nice and your emotions shine through. good job!

  • Awwah.... Dokie. =[
    I'm sorry.... This poem is very strong... Very strong indeed... I hope you'll feel better and slowly heal yourself.

    ~XoXo Mollipop

  • goalsv
    May 19

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    WOW! I can really feel your hurt and pain. A good write, just so sorry that you had to gp through all that to get it. Hope you can move on and heal from this. Even tho your write ask for the end, I think you have the strength to move on.