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Down There

The world feels like reality as
if I once was in a castle land
where I this soft prayer
underneath the dead sun
soft words spilled against
the air but could not touch
against the sky
the wind, my only feeling

When I prayed thought
I prayed with the lord
with my man

I wonder if my man thinks
thoughts like me
this life doesn't want to tell me
what I want to know
like an abstract painting
but who can read abstract?
no one

but these hands
this face
this body
was made
to make some
thing grow
gorgeous

so how I can
get hurt
plucked out like
a plant
then how would
I grow

to sucided my
virginity
for your taste?

if my man is not suppose
to hurt me
then why would you hurt me
so the feelings would perish
and my heart would be like
bucket full of plants
thrown gone

and if I"m what you say
the only beautiful
women"
why can't you wait
why would I give myself to you
when I consider you not the
most beautiful man...

soon I would be drown
in an dirty ocean
wondering
and I wouldn't see
anything beautiful
down there






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  • Rele anmwe
    May 19

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    Have a bless one

    The abstraction of things give us reason to stand alone and to perhaps take a deep breath, and then think. Our greatest achievement does not lie only in the clear things, but in the things that is constructed in such a perplex way that we are then inspired to have different thought and then paint from different aspect of our own understanding.

    you have a quality piece, could be polished a little more, but the thought is definitely beautiful. I love it. Keep up the great work and thank you for sharing. Have a bless one


    • Aurielle
      June 2
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      True but the abstraction of things can nevre be solved because its not clear so so therefore those that feel so spend the majority looking in when the solution will never be formed. Anything abstract is strange meaning alienated it is only something ugly that we try to percieve as beautiful. All clear things are beautiful it is though everything we do that we have to be clear. An abstract thing only gives an abstract solution such as something clear gives a clear resoning. Abstracts are only experiments that shall never last while clear last forever. Abstract is messy and clear is clear. IT is the clear ideas that make us think it the abstract idea that makes us derives for a clear idea which shall never come out because its unclear lol