A soul’s desire.
Burn’s inside a heart on fire.
The thoughts of love,
Lust is clear.
The thoughts aren’t hidden,
Yet they are always near.
Can’t hold them in,
Grab onto the fear.
Let them out,
Show those that are near.
That you love them,
That you care.
Your heart is not stone,
You’re not full of despair.
Show them the real you,
The one you want them to see.
Let yourself shine through,
Open up and be free.
Allow them to see the real you,
The real me…
Allow them to see it,
Before I go crazy.
Before I jump out of my skin,
With these thought full of sin.
I need to let it out,
Let people in.
Before I really am worthless,
Alone bruised and abused.
Before I am alone,
Used with an excuse.
An excuse be in this shell of mine,
And excuse not to come out,
Not to shine.
So no one will see what I can do,
What I can become.
So just let them in,
Let them see the real me.
Gotta let them in,
To see what I can be.
Author notes
i really need feedback on this one ... ...
need feedback took me a while to finish this one.
Comments
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i have to be honest this is a little too awkwardly sounding in the beginging which i think turns people off the middle has a little more consistencey to it but by the time most have gotten there they dont care to read on. i do admire the passion and emotion that is in this piece i believe it will give you a good jumping point when you re write this. keep penning!

