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The Power Of Love

You hurt without pain
And fight without fear

You wrong without blame
And cry without tears

You laugh without sound
and your world falls apart

But when your around
You love with much heart

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  • demonic princess93
    June 11

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    very good
    my favorite line was...''You hurt without pain And fight without fear''
    the 2 line stanzas are a very good way of writting poems

  • misspretty
    May 21

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    i realy like this poem its not like a long poem thats goes on forever. its short but explains alot.

  • Mr.AKALLDAY
    May 21
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    good poem i enjoyed reading it i like how the poem just flows