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The Calling

The mist of the sea
is breath to me
its air that flows
was born the beat of my heart

My soul drifts
even as it ships
pulled by the waves of saudade
Longing
unbearable to endure
I bury my dreams in its sand
sleeping for eternity  
where I belong

I cry when awake
my being aches
for just a moment
to be in that place
where I know peace resides

calling me by name
AURORA MEU AMOR
COME HOME....

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I spent the fall in Lisbon Portugal and found my soul

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  • Lovely...



    Beautiful poemization of affinity to a place. That is a dedicated adoration.

    How wonderful is to dedicate a feeling with an open heart!

    The closing lines: "Calling by my name 'Aurora meu amor' = "Dawn my love" come home"

    CALLING ME BY NAME
    AURORA MEU AMOR
    COME HOME....

    "AURORA"
    Dawn = Eos = Aurora. (English, Greek, Latin)

    In respect and appreciation,

    Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

  • to tell you the truth i did not understand this poem but wat i got from it it was good