Counting the days, face to face
once again a brief moment
falling for your bullshite and lies
hollow and empty heart
dark thoughts of what you said and did
your time will come and you will fall
hopeless insecure immature
man on his throne
look around you
just like you made of shit covered by your deceit
but you seem fine living your lie
fooling everyone but me
your just another piece of trash
not even half a man that a real man is
take one more look at me, who i am and will be
you can't have or be with me
not another thought of you will enter my mind
one day it will all come crumbling down
you will get what you deserve
like words written on a paper and burnt to ash
dust to dust!
Author notes
well then
A contest entry
- Slam Greeting Cards – I by Malabu.
1000 points, ended June 28, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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scorn of a woman...lover beware...I would not want to burn your bridge...the river is deep and im unable to swim
this is a bitter write...
thanks for taking time to enter
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Oh My!
You hit pretty hard with these words. It looks like you must have really been wronged by this person. Good to see you write it all out. Yeah! This card would slam the best of 'em. Good luck in the contest.
Much Love ♥
Renee
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Ouch~~~
Now this is one painful read but You said it like it is Woot!!!
Powerful emotion and a slam this was~
Gosh- I was backed into a wall with all that energy
Excellent Beautiful!
Thank You for sharing Your Heart
Best wishes in the contest
with love & light~ Desire~*~
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gee for my first read of you it stands out that you hit hard and fast , wouldnt want to be on the end of your scorn, great fiesty write tho
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come back n edit this
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YEA! That's telling like it is! Everyone must have wanted to say those exact words to someone once in their lives and you said them with just the proper amount of piss and vinegar. Good for you. I hope they stung like jelly fish tentacles on whatever cad you were addressing them to.
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thansk, but it is for a contest...
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