cherry trees blossom -
mouth-watering aromas
dazzle my taste buds
~
sweet-scented blooms
release liquid gold nectar
as honey bees emerge
~
blown on the wind
the humming bird
takes flight home
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Author notes
haiku chain
a chain of 3 haiku
haiku is a 3 line poem written in 17 syllables or less.
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A contest entry
- Form Poetry --- II by rinzurajan.
700 points, ended November 1, 55 entries
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What did you think
Comments
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LOVELY IMAGERY THERE...I LOVED THE WHOLE CONCEPT OF HONEY BEES
FLOWERS AND NATURE...
GOOD LUCK -
a most excellent ku chain
the second to my humble opinion is by far the best. image do clear, but all three are well done, very good write , well done
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lovely
I love this.
The second haiku was my favourite, especially
as honey bees emerge
great line, very visual.
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Amazing!!! The links between creatures and plants found in nature is so perfectly done. It leaves me so visually satisfied!!!!!!
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