Have you ever felt
-despair-
-death-
-rejection-
-desperation-
-melancholy-
-misery-
-pain-
-sorrow-
-grief-
---And wanted out?
Have you ever felt like you wanted out of your own skin?
Ever felt as if it were too small,
Too dead,
Too not you?
Have you ever wanted to just rip it off?
Aching teeth,
Im not able to breath.
The feelings
-consume-
-correct-
-deny-
-forget-
-define-
---Me.
I just want to rip it off,
Rip off this skin of mine.
I want to use my teeth,
I want to taste the blood.
I dont want this,
I dont want to do this.
Someone be me.
Some one
-love-
-hug-
-kiss-
-hold-
---Me.
Have you ever felt
-despair-
-death-
-rejection-
-desperation-
-melancholy-
-misery-
-pain-
-sorrow-
-grief-
---And wanted out?
Author notes
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exactly what im feeling right now
in fact so as you might imagine i realy like this write... good luck on the contest
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Thank-you very much.
Im glad you like it.
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This speaks in its own way. The just plain sorrwo growin and brewing inside. Nice write, good luck in the contest
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Thank-you very much.
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amazing
no, amazing doesnt even begin to describe it. i love it!
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Thank-you very much!
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this is just amazing.... i love it!
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Thank-you! ;D Im glad you like-love-it. ^_^
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i really love this. no there is nothing wrong with you. i have often felt this way, though i have never been able to describe it as wonderfully as you have here. you obviously have a lot of talent, and i truly truly love this piece. keep writing! and be honest with yourself, you're a beautifully dark person and thats okay.
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Thank-you. I am glad you liked this. =)
And again, thank-you. This comment I appreciate very much. You don't get many of these.
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