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When I'm Alone

I feel spiders up my spin
The cold darkness makes me shiver

I cant see the one I love
I feel like Im blind

I feel sickness come over my heart
I feel It breaking apart

I hear sounds of creatures
I hear the laughter of my lover

It is never sonny
It is never Warm

Like it was when i was in your arms
When i could smell you Order across the room

That is how i feel when i'm alone
Away from you

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  • XxTigerxX
    May 28
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    love the poem!

  • This is a god poem, i like it. Keep up the good work.

  • Good but check your spelling. like spine and oder and sunny. I like it though you have good conviction.