I feel spiders up my spin
The cold darkness makes me shiver
I cant see the one I love
I feel like Im blind
I feel sickness come over my heart
I feel It breaking apart
I hear sounds of creatures
I hear the laughter of my lover
It is never sonny
It is never Warm
Like it was when i was in your arms
When i could smell you Order across the room
That is how i feel when i'm alone
Away from you
Comments
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love the poem!


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This is a god poem, i like it. Keep up the good work.


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Good but check your spelling. like spine and oder and sunny. I like it though you have good conviction.



