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gamarada (for Juls)

sister melody,
you have brought
resolution to an
arrogant storm

and illuminated
respite into
dejection-

pardoning
our history
of endearment

(a wall)

complacent in
doubt.

you are daring
sentiment,
the unburdened heart
stark in radiant devotion

and through you
we've grown-

anew in a
reverie of
kindred souls.

Author notes

To 1/4 our of lovely Aussie gang. I wrote this especially for you dear. We love you with all our hearts.

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  • how very nice. im sure all who this is about will be most flattered. it is a very lovely piece full of so much heart and care

  • this is really cute nice form


  • Treasure 5 gold member
    May 24

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    This was brilliant very good you have a very good write. Thank you for the wonderful share.

  • This just resonates with an indefinable light because of the connection in it with the Australian folklore but even more so with it's undeniable warmth and love it exudes. You have made me smile for her and you guys are just the best. C

  • and another
    I thank you for my beautiful words. Can I love you guys more???
    you made me cry but in a good way
    Love
    Juls


    • loschung
      May 19
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      I wrote this morning because I felt inspired and I also felt that with your current troubles, a poetry present was in order. I'm glad to see it brightened up your day, dear.

      We love you too.

      - Kenny

      And did you notice the title is an Aboriginal word? I did that as a final detail just for you.

  • I probably say this every time but your diction always amazes me. It isn't forced, and you don't make yourself look like an ass I can see the perfectionist in you through your writes, because each one is precise, emotional yet not suffocating, and well... perfect. This was a beauty, I know she'll love it
    Jeanette*~

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