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[ i want you ]

i want you
the casual mention of silk
and the rubbing of metal, skin
icecubes
dark skin against my body
i can only imagine

the little smile
why do i hide behind these words?
pulling the long darkness
the arch of the neck
tongue
dusky eyes
only in sneaky dreams

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