Come in,
I am in.
A contest entry
- Write on my walls by Cinnarry.
3500 points, ended June 7, 32 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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I am not impressed. I feel something is missing.
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Well. No one (and I mean NO ONE) could accuse you of verbosity here. I mean we are talking about a short goddam' poem, if such it can be called, squire.
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loveyoubabe
Meeting you after ages it seems - though it is always a pleasure! 'Come In' is more a joke than a poem and someone wanted it, not that I felt an urge to write it.
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clever
What a wonderful use of five,short,simple words.This is so witty.I love it. -
Im not going to applaud this one...
To be honest I found this piesce to be terrible but it is quite a good write for someone as young as you are. It shows some potential. -
it says a lot! it is very interpretive and highly expressive. it leaves a lot to the imagination. it conjures up deep thoughts. a touch of genius. my best to you in the contest.
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haha! as opposed to stay out, get out! this is almost terminal. hope you wrote it in blazing orange...
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