Darling, let the magical blue mountains and lush green valley's of the country you love, inspire you to reach the full potential of who you are. Don't let the darkness of the past define you, they are but growing pains along the journey of the magnificent man you will become. Feed on the diversity before you.
Follow the season's with fervour and let the light of each new beginning grow deep inside. Don't become a dead withered tree that reaches for the warmth of a marmalade sun, but never grows. Become akin to the bubbling river that flows through your veins, that you so dearly love, a force to be reckoned with, that never fears. Whether there be rapids or plateau's, it constantly pushes on, forever changing, boulders eventually becoming nothing but pebbles, don't let anything stand in your way.
You are as precious as the world in which we live, so diverse, fragile and complex,
yet beautiful just the same. Sweetheart, have faith in yourself and your ability to
shine, like the stars that will pierce through the darkness of indigo night skies,
unpolluted by city lights.
Draw me an ocular feast of a mare and her foal, gambling and neighing in a
dolly mixture of flora and fauna within a meadow sweet. Paint me pictures with your words of raspberry ripple dawns and vivid strawberry blush sunsets. Of spiderwebs adorned in the fine dazzling jewelery that nature bestows on them each morn. Of bumblebee's and butterflies, and of the choir of birds as they sing their even songs and dawn chorus's.
Let me see the little lambs jumping for joy under a lemon sherbet sun in spring, that seamlessly hangs in a sky as blue and as bright as my sapphire eyes, of fallen woolly clouds, bleating as they graze contented on a lush emerald meadow speckled with vibrant red poppies and dainty white daisies. Baby, sew me a patchwork of majestic purple mountains shrouded in a mystical mist, of rolling hills and lush green valleys and of dark and ancient forests, of corn fields, from chocolate brown to blankets of vibrant greens and yellows, held together by threads of grey stone walls. Paint me your cotton candy dreams as vibrant as rainbows and as powerful as electrical storms.
Bring to life your Eden, let me experience the vibrancy of its people and culture, its history of magical times past and those yet to come. As you leisurely amble by the side of the singing River Dee, sit for awhile in quiet reflection and send me a sign on a whispered breeze, that you have found tranquility, solitude and the peace you seek. As you continue on your walk, should you chance upon an elegant willow tree dressed in her finest regalia of muted soft green, stop and notice how her bough's bow and curve in the soft gentle breeze of a perfect citrus summers day. see how the rare and precious jewels of true love shimmer and dazzle on the ripples of the clear blue river below.
Pause and quietly remember me, for it is I my love, forever by your side, sending you my love and blessings, as I gracefully bow in honour and awe...Of the extraordinary gentle man and poet, I came to know, love, cherish and adore...
...My greatest love.
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The love of my life 
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Inspirational ~ This is the type of reading that can inspire anyone to keep fighting for love, and the love ones in your life. Almost has the feel of the song "Wind beneath your wings" and you are the 'wind'.
Beautifully done, Thanks for entering the contest, it is my pleasure having you take the time to enter the contest. I intend in judging the contest at the close. Thanks! -
amazing .. left me speechless & now i don't know what to say but great write
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STUNNING
Superb writing Sugar. You have poured your all into this and it has resulted in a stunning piece of writing that you pulled from the depths of your soul. Wonderful
Darkest Love
Wayne Leon
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Thank you hon, it is for a wonderful person that has touched me deeper than he knows The best I have ever known and will ever know. he is and always will be my greatest love. As always it's a pleasure to have the King of darkness come visit my page, your comment valued and appreciated.
Darkest Love
Chelle xxx
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wow. At first the length turned me away, but them I started reading and I couldn't stop! this was amazing!! I loved every heartfelt word! You painted so many vivid images in this piece it was just perfect! Thank you so much for entering my contest!
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Amazing
Sug, this has left me speechless. The words before me are a wonderful expression of true love, friendship and devotion. The images this produces are outstanding. I sense a touch of sadness in your last stanza as though he won't be or isn't with you anymore. Hon, when you have experienced the love you two have shared no matter where you are in the world you will always be connected and in others hearts and thoughts. Beautiful infact stunning.
wishing you the best Emma
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Thank you hon for your lovely comment, you are right on the sadness, and everything you say is true, he will be forever with me. He means more to me
than he will ever know. He is a true blessing, and will always be my everything
and greatest love.
Best wishes to you
~sugar~
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Wow.
One of your best writings of any kind, ever. Very heartfelt & passionate. I can see why he's your greatest love. Great one, sis.
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Thank you bro for your fab comment
as always it is a pleasure to have you read
~sugar~
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It easy to see that this fellow was YOUR GREATEST LOVE, indeed!
He has inspired you yo write what I believe is your GREATEST PIECE which makes me long to go back outside where i have spent most of my day to partake of more of the wonders of nature - as well as all of the peace and love that can be experienced and found in every blade of grass, every pebble and every stone, in every leaf of every tree, in every petal of every flower, in every note of every birds song, in every ripple and reflection in a river or stream, in every wave in every sea, in every grain of sand, and on and on - until infinity. Thanks for sharing this fine piece, Baby - and perhaps you will find A GREATER & LONGER LASTING LOVE as time goes by - and if not - at the very least a BESTEST MATE and a loving companion to comfort you and to share the songs of your heart and soul with - for many, many, many more years to come!
Peace & Love!
Earl.
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Thank you baby for your beautiful comment, he is my greatest love and always will be. I wish him the best of everything because he deserves it, as for another love I think I will pass on that and just stick to chatting to me bestest mate
As always a pleasure to have you read and comment, I am glad you have had a wonderful day outdoors, enjoying the sun.
Love you Chelle xxx
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am absolutely
amazed at the beauty and love and friendship and desire all found in your letter, such a divine thing to write, and share, and have in your live, thanks for sharing it all with us!
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Thank you for stopping by to read your comment
is valued and appreciated.
~sugar~
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a very beautiful letter. full of imagery. thank you for sharing this with me today. i am looking forward to reading more from you in the near future. viyanna rosemarie
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Thank you for stopping by and leaving your lovely comment
valued and appreciated
~sugar~
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This is an extremely touching letter filled with great emotion and heart felt words pouring out of it. beautifully written. Please return the favor
huggles
Lena
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Thank you for your lovely comment
valued and appreciated
~sugar~
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Now here is a true love letter.
One that is filled with beautiful images that
shine with each word spoken from the heart.
Whomever he is, he is the most luckiest man around.
For you, my dear friend, and sister of poetry, have
written your heart here for all to see.
Joann
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Thank you Joann for you lovely comment, he is a wonderful man that has been a
true blessing in my life, he knows he's loved.
~sugar~
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Oh honey
The richness of love, the touching of friendship, and the honestly of divercity that flows..
A most beautiful dedication
and the imagery of voice, breath taking..
I am totally in awe
best wishes my friend
Julie
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Thank you Julie for your wonderful comment
a pleasure to read and receive
~sugar~
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