Philogophical
Born to the day entirely gaudy in it's path.
Unrelatable to the source,
--------unspecified to the eye
--------------------------------------------still----------------------------------------------------------
in it's being.
Forget This Latenet Drone!
It nor You have no place here.........
Resonant in the solace of ink,
it continues.
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I usually like poems that lack structure, in order to tell a story. but honestly the structure, and the poem is a little to abstract for my mind to get a grasp of.
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this was difacult for me to read.
best of luck in the contest. -
As impenetrable piece of writing as I have ever read. If you are going to write a very abstract piece there has to be a bit of comprehensible material so that the reader is tempted to solve the mystery posed by the rest of the poem. Emotionally sterile, but most abstract poems are,
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