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Cradling Chloe (to a fellow AP member - daviscth)

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Mommy & Daddy's arms [C]radle me
I am their precious little angel, [H]eld
in their arms of [L]ove

Little do they kn[O]w
They won't have m[E] for long

But I want them to know I [L]oved them true
And God is [A] good parent too

I will see them in heave[N]
With my little hand outstr[E]tched

♥ [thanking them for all they've done] ♥

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  • A beautiful poem and so well penned. I might add also that you have been very creative in the way that you represented your acrostic.The emotions that you have woven into your write can be felt by the reader as they read your words, there for making it a wonderful write to read.
    I wish you well in the contest my friend with much love and happiness.
    ~Anne~


  • daviscth silver member
    May 21

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    This is beautiful! At first, I thought that this isn't an acrostic, then I realized what you had done. Very creative style. I may have to try this. Thank you so much for the entry.

  • I love this poem
    It is beautifully presented
    Words touch and are felt
    Best wishes
    Julie