Mommy & Daddy's arms [C]radle me
I am their precious little angel, [H]eld
in their arms of [L]ove
Little do they kn[O]w
They won't have m[E] for long
But I want them to know I [L]oved them true
And God is [A] good parent too
I will see them in heave[N]
With my little hand outstr[E]tched
♥ [thanking them for all they've done] ♥
Author notes
picture credit: http://i251.photobucket.com/albums/gg289/daviscth/family/Chloe%20Lane%20Utterback/p10729ta100207_18.jpg
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A contest entry
- (contest #222) Use Chloe’s name to create an acrostic. by daviscth.
10250 points, ended June 15, 25 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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A beautiful poem and so well penned. I might add also that you have been very creative in the way that you represented your acrostic.The emotions that you have woven into your write can be felt by the reader as they read your words, there for making it a wonderful write to read.
I wish you well in the contest my friend with much love and happiness.
~Anne~

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This is beautiful! At first, I thought that this isn't an acrostic, then I realized what you had done. Very creative style. I may have to try this.
Thank you so much for the entry.


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I love this poem
It is beautifully presented
Words touch and are felt
Best wishes
Julie




