I used to spend so much time dwelling on the past,
Life's to short, time goes by way too fast.
Never look back, keep your eyes ahead.
Forget about all the things left unsaid.
To drop all this confusion.
I've come to this conclusion.
To never regret any thing in life.
Mistakes make me try harder,
they really make me strife.
Days go by, somethings change.
Memories will forever remain.
Pain and tears will go away,
Darkness turns the light,
But the sun can't always stay.
Life's just one crazy ride, so be ready to hold on tight.
To drop all this confusion.
I've come to this conclusion.
To never regret any thing in life.
Mistakes make me try harder,
they really make me strife.
Life can be mysterious,
Some paths can throw you in the wrong direction,
But that's okay there's no such thing as perfection.
Theirs times to laugh, and times to be serious.
Never give up, never give in,
Never regret, things will get better in the end.
Author notes
Word prompt; conclusion
I know this came out weird sorry...
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a good poem, yeah, do not let regrets take you into the realms of sighs, just carry on regardless of mistakes.
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Not weird , i like it (:
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I guess this is under the category of philosophy. I thought it was well written and I loved the points you made. Thank you for entering.
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Weird? Not in my view
This is not weird,it is creative and poignant.Thankyou for entering. -
ok hun this isn't weird at all!!! i love it, i tell myself this ALL the time, to bad i still get lost in the past, great write!!!
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Wow this really open my eyes right about now.. I never thought that way, never looked at the positivity of life i am always negetive this poem touched me in a way i can't really explain.
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This is great :] I really like your style of writing.
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very true lines:
Life can be mysterious,
Some paths can throw you in the wrong direction,
But that's okay there's no such thing as perfection.
I think with a little work on the rhythm this could really work. I.e make some of the longer lines shortened to match the poem.
other than that this was a Great take on the prompt and a very positive message
Thankyou so much for entering this contest lol
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very true lines:
Life can be mysterious,
Some paths can throw you in the wrong direction,
But that's okay there's no such thing as perfection.
I think with a little work on the rhythm this could really work. I.e make some of the longer lines shortened to match the poem.
other than that this was a Great take on the prompt and a very positive message
Thankyou so much for entering this contest lol
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i didnt think it came out weird. it was great. i like the end. you did a great job on this.
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wow *hugs you* so good sis so much truth to it and it made me think great job
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it came out amaazing
this is soo true i really love this
love you sis -
Amazing job and that is very true. Things get better in the end. This is an excellent write. I think you did a good job =].
Damien <3
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