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Chocolate Cake

                        Brown
                      Soft Fudge
                      Chocolate
                  I dont hear it
                But i do smell it

what did you think? its nothing really just for fun.

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  • individuality gold member
    May 19

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    cake is always good - i hear it, too often i think, it speaks to me a lot, my waistline screams noooo but i smother its screams with elasticated pants and shovel in more cake - a good poem.

  • loafy
    May 18
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    Awesome, I like your rhetorical poem. Very obvious yet very enthralling.


  • She burns
    May 18
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    So sweet like a chocolate!!!