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Deep Blue Love

There was always that feeling,
never knowing if it was enough.
All of what I wanted to say,
I would always bite down on the iron
on my tongue...

 

Wanted to let you know how

I really felt.

The love I wanted between us..

could be so true.

 

You almost lost me,

for that is what you thought,

but it was only to see if you 

really wanted me.

 

I guess the time has come

for all of our bad memories 

to be only memories and nothing 

of what is to be..

 

I hope to let you know how 

you always make my heart beat 

just a little bit faster as you,

look at me so.

 

The color in my face grows a 

deep red with joy,

knowing you're all mine.

 

Knowing the love we have 

will never go out like a piolt light

knowing we will grow old and 

withered together.

 

Remembering all I need is to look 

in your eyes and be free,

from all crazyness that surrouds us.

Knowing all we need is each other to 

get through the days.

 

Every onuce of pain and sarrow I've

ever felt washed with the deep blue 

of your eyes..

 

Making everything all seem 

that much brighter,

without the shadows of dout to cloud 

my thoughts of us.

 

I never knew a love like ours 

so bright and and golden like 

the sun above to finish the greatest 

day of our lives.

 

All of our past is nothing to what is 

to come, the love we share is

nothing compred to those around us.

So small like the ant you flick of the 

pinic blanket.

 

Ours is like the sun so golden and bright

with nothing, but forever to make it even better

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