Thinking you were different
That true love was real
Mask of deception
Just a diversion
False sense to feel
Intentions not of love
But material gain
Pleasure and defame
Words wanted to hear
Nothing sincere
Deceiver of dreams
Destoyer of hope
Betrayer of faith
Slippery slope
Hopes have gone insane
Crawling back once again
Into deep despair
No way in which to repair
Deceiver of dreams
Destoyer of hope
Betrayer of faith
Slippery slope
Shattered dreams
Remnants only remain
Imbedded in the heart
Scars that tore us apart
Faith betrayed
Greed feeds the need
Collapsed around
Your flames from hell abound
Oblivious to your wrath
Deceiver of dreams
Destoyer of hope
Betrayer of faith
Slippery slope
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This is a gorgeous write and I can really relate... thankyou so much for entering this piece in my contest, and I wish you the best of luck!
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Faith betrayed
Greed feeds the need
Collapsed around
Your flames from hell abound
Oblivious to your wrath
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Wonderful, I love the line:
"Deceiver of dreams
Destoyer of hope
Betrayer of faith
Slippery slope"
Slippery slope; such an amazing metaphor for the loss of love, and loss of the person.
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Wonderful!!
I loved it!! Very meaningful.. lol i dont know what im saying...
I really dont think theres anything you should change..... Seem find to me.
-MoonSpirit
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