I'm bored of magic,
I wish I was in bed
Oh wait,
Does that mean
I'm kinda dead?
C'mon man- I've had enough of this shit-
No one, but NO ONE is better off alone
Everyone needs a girl to rely on,
And to be relied upon,
So get off your fat-ass and find yourself one!
My books of adventures won and to-be-won
Are all covered with monthly bills
And I feel guilty to move either
So remain in a limbo of grog
Not able to leave the house
Constantly stagnant
I can't see a future for me or anything else
Septic, you can't just scrub that dirty love out 'til your skin
Is as red as her dress was the first time you saw her
You need to use mint green to soothe- the therapy of a salve
Here, I'll rub it in for you
See, isn't that better?
Yeah, you'll be okay.
You'll be okay.
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a good poem, ah alone v love - it's a juggled way, some like to be in a sea of solitude whilst others want love in their hair.
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Line #15 ... "You neat to use mint green..." is it supposed to be "You need to use mint green ..."? I don't know. Just thought I'd mention it. Sounds like a great start! Peace.
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You're right. I have been doing that a lot recently and it worries me a bit... just trying to type too fast I guess...
Thanks for pointing it out, though.
It's not a start- it's a whole poem, lulz!
Just thought I would shorten it, as it would make it easier to read, but no one else commented anway, lol.
But you did and that means a lot to me- thanks for stopping by. :hugz:
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