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Sitzen hier,
Sitzen hier ohne mein Kopf,
Er ist in die Luft,
Und wann mein Kopf ist gebracht,
Ich mache nichts,
Lass es Wandert,
Lass es geht woanders,
Und wann es kommt nach hause,
Sie erzahlt von der Westen,
Sie gibt mich ideen,
Uber welche ich kann denken,
Und dann ich schlafe schwer,
Mein Kopf mit mir,
Wahrend ich sitze hier.

Author notes

Siting here,
Siting here without my head,
It is in the air,
And when my head is needed,
I do nothing,
Let it wander,
Let it go somewhere else,
And when it comes home,
It speaks of the west,
It gives me ideas,
Which I can think about,
And then I sleep hard,
My head with me,
While I'm siting here.

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  • wow, i like this... i could only understand some of it... im in german one... so i was just picking out words but i see you have it in the AN, nice write