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Renewal

Amber irises

  evoke tranquility,

within turbulant green.

Transcending all turmoil.

Calming the chaos.

Combining beings

   to complete a whole 


More precious than

   their seperate existance.

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  • Serene Rose
    May 20

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    o wow. this is intersting. I like how it's short and..i dont know. I dont know how to describe it. Like... passionate I guess. What is it about?
    I love it. It's VERY well written


  • Girl With Guitar silver member
    May 20

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    Looking into a lovers eyes?
    I'm tired and blonde, but I'm pretty sure this is about that.
    If not, I'll still say this. I never knew just how much I could feel simply by looking into a persons' eyes. I feel so connected with him when I look into his. It's like sex almost.

    You have a unique ability to say so much with so little and I'm still jealous of that. Not many can do it this well!