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A Love Poem.

My life lay entirely to your chosen fate
Whether you wish to love or to hate

I act independent, but indeed it’s a lie
Yet so many times have i tried to deny
That without you I’d simply have no importance
You’ve gave me a meaning by showing me romance.

A beautiful world I now see through these eyes
Nevertheless, No sign of Cupid in the skies
Was this love meant to happen or merely luck?
Coincidence, head over heels, love struck

All down to commitment, I’m yours if you will
Give me your love, in return, i’ll fulfill
your wishes, your dreams, i’m all for you
Promise me forever, your words remain true.

As long as your mine, we’ll for always be one
A time of contentment, baby, just begun.

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  • Antebellum
    May 18

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    I really like the ending of this.

    "That without you I’d simply have no importance
    You’ve gave me a meaning by showing me romance."

    The rhyme to this is nice, but this area seems a bit forced.