Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

Garden of Tears

Sitting on lush grass leaning against a stately elm
thoughts of desire transport me to where you are.
Your vision appears before me in a dreamy haze
silence avails only the beat of my heart audible.

Highlights dancing in your hair orchestrated by the sun.
Eyes pooling waters of need from the well of wishes.
Warm breezes blow yet you wrap yourself in arms embrace
Hope; like a hummingbird dart in and out of a soulful heart

Loneliness thick in the air leeching oxygen filled lungs
solitude the only presence in a tearful garden,
sitting among flowers of blooming want and various regret.
Aching to comfort you yet my words like weeds; useless.

With a kiss I blow a dandelion to the wind
each little fiber carries love, passion and forever
Winds of ;I love you lift them high with determination,
swirling around you, bringing the promise of together

Words are only a good when they are acted on.
Promises easily broken and excused as being a mistake.
But winds are constant, dandelions renew again and again
Just as my love for you is unconquerable , eternal,I love you

What did you think

    I plan to revise this poem: please leave constructive criticism!
    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • arafura gold member
    May 18
    Edit | Reply
    Great work. Very well penned indeed!


  • Antebellum
    May 18
    Edit | Reply
    the second and final stanzas are my favorite.
    This flows nicely.