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Don't fall for me

Don't fall for me.
Be strong and walk away.
If you know what's good for you
you'll forget me if you can.

Don't fall for me.
You'll only get caught in webs of lies I've spun,
threads meant to shield you will only cause you pain.

Don't fall for me.
Ignore each impulse,
don't let your heart win the battle.
Listen to your common sense.
We've been down this road before.

Don't fall for me.
It will only make it easier
for me to fall for you.

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  • pkoirish
    July 30
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    WOW

    very sad and emotionally dark. i have been down the road you are talking about..
    Patrick


  • Garmond gold member
    May 23

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    Clever use of conundrum to show confused sentiment. The last stanza is a great ending and brings light and new meaning to everything preceding it.
    I tip my hat to thee.

  • Heartfelt angie! You know the heart wants what the heart wants. How can they not fall for you? Your just too sweet!


  • Antebellum
    May 18

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    "Don't fall for me.
    Ignore each impulse,
    don't let your heart win the battle.
    Listen to your common sense.
    We've been down this road before."

    This is amazing.
    simply stunning.

  • ohhhh myy goodness! i love this... it makes me think: this is like me. =/
    i heart you big sis. this is amazing.
    first poem in awhile, and it's great. =]

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