Death is near
Time is here
time to deal with your fear
never shed a single tear
Don't cry now
look to the sky
accept your fate
it's time to die
I've dug your grave
I've made your made
give up life
Forever rest your head
red roses for you
black veil for me
bullets for my brain
for you i'm coming to see
Author notes
This is actuall not written by me its wriiten by a dear friend of mine Triston. He is a great poet and a dear friend
what should i have donr differently
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Wow simply wow this is dark deep and passionate and I embrace it as a thing of beauty this is wonderful.
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wow! thats amazing and i loved every word of it, really loved it
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I liked it I don't realy think that there is much to change! tell Triston Good Job and to keep on writing!
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scary deep and just good not my style of poetry but i like it
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thanks for 5the comment but like i said i didnt write it a friend did then asked me to put it on here so i did
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pretty interesting write! i don't like suicides but in this one it does brings out the passion..
I thgt Triston was the guy who troubles in ur class
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