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Feeling Down

Not sad

but

lower than you

want


Today's low

might be

tomorrow's high


Today's high

might be

tomorrow's low


Kept in perspective


Feeling high

is

on it's way

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  • AJ Morelli gold member
    June 1

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    Not sad but lower than you want... yes I know this

    thanks for encouraging words


    and for entering the contest


    al


  • Sarah957
    May 29
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    I like your optimism! You really put it in perspective =)


  • Whoochi gold member
    May 21
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    Optimistic...We all have the ability and choice to choose our attitude and reality!


  • Manicmuze
    May 18
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    i like... definately signs of hope.
    Enjoyed it, nicely done,
    ~ wendy


  • Denerica
    May 18
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    Hope and inspired. Clever concept. Blessings.

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