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More than a woman

The viens in your gentle hands
make it clear the way a woman works
When I recall  your voice
I hear you singing
as you bathed me
about the butcher, the baker, the candle stick maker
and I know I am forever loved
Forever the shy, blushing, little girl
hiding behind your legs before unknown faces
full of questions you tried your best to answer
and all the restless nights I caused
could never slim your heart
The only arms in the world
that make me feel
as if everything will really,
some how fit perfectly into place
are yours

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100 words from my heart.

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  • An excellent write. Thank you for follwing all the rules. And yes, this is a wonderful write very inspirational. Flows wonderfully and you wrote so well that I can just see this little girl hiding behind mama's legs.

    Thanks for sharing this with us and thanks for entering it into my contest.