Jerk my tears dear God,
Like you jerk my words and love.
Take them and smash them,
Like pumpkins on Halloween.
Yell at me forever but cry not,
For tears are reserved for me.
You've killed me inner soul,
What's left is only inner.
A smile forms but doesn't show,
As I curse at the world with anger.
Hate me dear God,
Like I know you do.
Last words never spoken,
Are repeated all over again.
Hate my dear God,
Like you hated my love.
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What should I keep doing, and what should I stich up?
Comments
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A good rant but I think you missed the idea in the prompt.
Thank you for your entry. Best of luck in the judging. ~Pamela
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This is very hard-hearted and spiteful. I rarely see hate directed this way. I like it, though. It's bold and careless, in a way.
Best of luck and thanks for entering! -
god is love it just wasn't the right 1 don't worry you'll find the right 1 with god's help because god loves you like i love this poem
thanx 4 entering good luck -
I am a bit shocked
God hating love
a bit confused
I am so sorry you feel this way
God is simply love,
pain guides you if your cycle continues so does the pain
maybe your prayer should be for God to help you over an obstacle.
so sad
God bless you my friend...
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