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A queens demand

I crave fer new excitements,
An' I think 'ere t' start,
I want a golden castle.

She be a echo o' -
Me beloved ship an' lover,
Th' golden arrow.

Aye ye be seein', before I became -
Th' sea dog queen I had a life,
An' a lo'er whom I miss so much.

He be off an' away on th' ocean,
Walkin' th' sand in th' depths,
Fer he will nerebreath again.

An' in me castle I will hold -
Me most beautiful bountiful booty,
An' me biggest rocks an' diamonds.

Aye, I want a homeport that be warn,
An' stands still in th' green mist,
One I shall one tide sleep peaceful in.

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Prompt: Pirates serve the Queen

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  • Ken-Maverick
    September 20

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    "An' in me castle I will hold -
    Me most beautiful bountiful booty,
    An' me biggest rocks an' diamonds.

    Aye, I want a homeport that be warn,
    An' stands still in th' green mist,
    One I shall one tide sleep peaceful in."
    - I like that.

    You sound like quite the pirate, lol
    Nicely done indeed.

    Ken

  • A REAL pirate here, me thinks most surely and confidently! Yer poem speaks out with the pirate language and so it must be so that you are a pirate and this poem is one of yer best, for it rocks my boat and sails my ship. lol


  • Melodies
    May 29

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    Oooooooooooohhh I really admire this clever poem with fine pirate talk throughout!
    Love the booty and diamonds. lol Thank you ever so much for coming to our group contest.