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Life

It's been so long
Too long, I fear
Since I've taken time
To write what I feel
How I've yearned
And wanted to speak
But thoughts are jumbled
And feelings, meek
I think back on my life
Three and a half years ago
To look at me now,
This girl, you'd not know
I had fallen apart
For a short while, lost my mind
But soon began building
A life that was finally mine
A life without him
Was one worth living
A life without he
Who was so unforgiving
He never forgave
And never apologized
For the things that he did
That were just as bad as mine
I’ve grown up since then
And now I can see
The blame I once gave myself
Didn’t all belong to me

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  • mdshec
    May 18
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    Very Good

    I like the flow of this short essay of the past few years.