I just stopped in for a one night stay,
so tired, having driven all night and day.
I didn't plan to see you here,
it's been along time, just shy of a year.
Since you've left me for her,
life's passed me by in such a blur.
But tonight my dear, I'll have my revenge,
right here in room 7, at Passions Inn.
I showered and dressed just for you,
since "slut's" your style, I can be one too.
With my tight denim mini and seductive bra,
I walked in the bar and heard you say "ahhh".
You scurried over like a hungry little rat,
pulled up a chair and beside me you sat.
"Wow, you've changed" is what you said,
my reply, " I know, the old me is dead".
The day you walked away, is the day I died,
you broke my heart, stole my trust, my pride.
Since you've left, men...there've been many,
I've learned quite allot, though I've never loved any.
So come on in to room number seven,
and tonight my dear, I'll take you to heaven.
Now place your hands 'round my trim little waist,
lift me up and give my sweet lips a taste.
I nibble your neck and I'm getting quite wet,
I feel your hardness, and I whisper "not yet."
Very slowly I unbutton and remove your shirt,
your taut chest I remember, and again I hurt.
I push you slowly onto the king size bed,
my nails raking slowly, the hair on your head.
You start to speak, but I "shshhh" you away,
afraid I'll fall for whatever you say.
I continue to seduce you and I can see in your eyes,
you're filled with wonder, amazement and surprise.
My hands move down slowly, "damn, that chest",
of all I've seen, I loved yours best.
I move on down and unbutton your slacks,
when we were together this is where I lacked.
But not tonight, you will get the best yet,
and just like my heart, you'll never forget.
First I stroke your hot, throbbing cock,
ahhhh, I say, " it's hard as a rock".
I lick it seductively with my warm, wet tongue,
my hand stokes your shaft ,while the head's stroked by my thumb.
You're moaning for release, but I whisper, "let's go slow",
everything you've missed, I just want to know you know.
I move a little faster now my hand and mouth in sync,
my eyes shift up to your startled face and I can't resist a wink.
Your head is swelling larger, I know you're about to blow,
slowly I release you, even though you're begging "no".
My nipples are hard and throbbing, so I lift my breasts up to my tongue,
I lick them both seductively and hear the hot air leave your lungs.
Now it's time to work my magic, watch my mouth and tongue do tricks,
so tomorrow when I think of you, I'll think, " Oh, what a prick!"
I move back up and straddle you, just once more for old time's sake,
but all those feelings come rushing back and I remember my mistake.
I lift myself from your throbbing cock because it felt so good,
I swore I'd never love again, but I knew with you I could.
Ignoring your protests I slide down to straddle your legs,
"please,please", you say, oh how I love to hear you beg.
Now the time is here to give you all I've got,
I take you deep into my throat where all is wet and hot.
Such a perfect fit I think, your cock was made for me,
but what once, I thought was good, never again can be.
My hands are not assisting now, just my tongue, my mouth, my lips,
I love the feel of your huge cock thrusted by your gyrating hips.
Oh yes, you're swelling huge now, and I hear your urgent plea's,
"Oh baby that feels so good, I can't hold...I need release."
Deeper and deeper I take you in, and I know that you're unsure,
am I really going to swallow you...once so innocent and pure?
Though you will never know it, I really loved the taste,
just as I still love you, that's why I'll leave with haste.
Now you pull me close saying all I've yearned to hear,
and I know deep in my heart that you really are sincere.
But I'm the one who's damaged now, I will never be the same,
though this was a chance meeting, I'm really glad I came.
I tell you lies you want to hear when I say once more I'll try,
satisfied, you fall asleep unaware I ever cried.
I pack my meager change of clothes and tip-toe to the door,
I think it hurts as bad this time, just as it did before.
As I travel into the darkness, I still see your handsome face,
there's some things time and distance never will erase.
I wonder when tomorrow comes if you'll hurt as much as I,
when you read, "Remember me...p.s. sorry that I lied."
Author notes
Stay-A+ , Picture prompt
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Thank You!
I just logged on, and what a wonderful, shiny surprise...never thought it'd even place, thank you for the pic inspiration to jog my lazy muse.
Blessings,
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Awesome take on the prompt, very hot, meaningful and well-structured...Nicely done
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THIS PIECE: A+++++++
Wonderfull story line..You took the prompt and ran with it.. You kept this judge on the edge of her seat..Pain, love, want, desire, and loss alll in one.
Great job.
Good luck Poet, You made the finalist list.
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