Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

My child

My child
This life is wild and mild
Sometime glitters or truly bright
And sometime star could be moonlight
And moonlight could be lamp post
That make the street bring their brightness most
Colours and shades in open lightly day
With peoples consciousness mind in lovely pray
Sometime, it’s darker in its wholesome blackness
Even one lonely star above in its full flashiness
Which you may not acknowledged as a day shy
All hopefulness will be chartered and dry
But let your faith be your staff
In journeys of life to guide you safe
Let your virtue be surrounded by loyal
For many will bless you and made you royal
And walk as firm as your confidence in your lord
And say not a folly reproaches by taming your word

What did you think

    I plan to revise this poem: please leave constructive criticism!
    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)