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Don't Let This Go lyrics

Don't let me down
Don't let this go

We don't know where this is headed
Don't let that scare you

Just take my hand
Don't run away

Don't let me down
Don't let this go

We'll take a walk
On the beach
Listen to the waves crash
And watch the sun set

Just speak your mind
Tell me all your fears
I'm not going anywhere
I'm not leaving you

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  • FallingRainDrop
    May 18
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    this is really good. the lines together are all perfect. "Listen to the waves crash
    And watch the sun set" i love those lines because it really sets the atmosphere. "Just speak your mind
    Tell me all your fears
    I'm not going anywhere
    I'm not leaving you" those were great too! love this :]