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closed curtain looks

I'm expanding in the night
catching everyones eyes
peeking out of the keyholes
they see their world through

once i was like them
only seeing what was allowed
what only i let myslef see
but i am not longer
able to obtain that luxury
i have to have everything the way it is
ever since i woke up on the side of your street
wondering how many days ive been perminant pedestrian
without the right of way
just waiting for something from you in return
other then your closed curtain looks

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