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Its hard to explain just what i love about you the most

You mean everything to me, am i everything to you
Baby, without you in my life, i wouldn't know what to do
Your the only one i turn to when things aren't going right
When we lay together i feel so good when you hold me tight

I wanna be with you forever and that will never change
Im hoping you feel the same and your feelings don't rearrange


I think of you every morning when i wake up and every night
I know sometimes i can be hard to handle and very up-tight
But i promise you one thing that will never change is that I Love You
I know we both will make mistakes but i know we will pull through

We have had so many fun times together and its hard to say goodbye
I wish you could stay with me every day but i know your reply


I love just laying with you and watching something on tv
I wish we could be together every day, just you and me
Every minute we are apart i miss you more and more
I have so many feelings for you that I've never had before

Its hard to explain just what i love about you the most
Maybe its the way you always say i love you and hold me close
Or maybe its those beautiful eyes that i look forward to seeing every night
But then again it could be the way you make me feel like everything's alright


So maybe its the way you laugh at me when I've done something dumb
Then i look at you and the very first thing that you do is run
Or maybe its the way you call me beautiful a million times every day
While telling me I'm the only one and to never leave you and go away

I love you with every piece of my heart and im hoping you feel the same
Because it would be kinda sexy having Hempen as my last name


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  • second-born
    October 13
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    the title is oh so good...makes me think what 'I love most' about someone that I love...thanks for sharing this wonderful piece!


  • Floatational
    October 10
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    Your poem is magic before my eyes beauty in every form you deserved first place congratulations.


  • MJ Forgives
    October 10

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    I loved reading this. I totally forgot that I read this before until I was scrolling down while I was reading it. Then I recognized your last line from before. To me that line will always be non forgetable to me. I hope you do well in my contest and thanks for entering. You are part of the finalists now . This shows so much that love that I am loving your poem. Love and Peace!
    -Jess


  • WordsAndWits
    August 21

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    A very touching write. I liked it. I do think you need to fix your grammar mistakes and the places you said "i". Other than that this is an amazing piece! Thanks for adding and best of luck,
    - Caroline

  • XxLuckyxX
    August 12

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    This is such a wonderfully touching write and a true pleasure to read. I think you did an excellent job with the rhyme scheme and the flow is nice and smooth. I love the simple way you express your love in this write. Simple yet you convey so much emotion. I love the ending you put on it, I think it adds something extra to the poem and shows the true extent of how you feel. Every line written is a beautiful expression of your love. Thank you so much for your wonderful entry. Best of luck in the contest.

  • MJ Forgives
    August 10
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    *laughs* Ahhh how cute. I can relate to the last name though the best. But I can really relate to your poem. I hope you do wonderful in my contest and thanks for your entry. Your on the finalist because I can feel the love. Also it pulled my heart strings too.
    -Jess


  • nobodys-girl
    June 22

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    this is so cute and just so amazing! The ending line is just so perfect! thank you so much for entering my contest and best of luck!


  • JadedAngel6648
    June 1
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    This was a very nice poem. It was a little bit redundant but for what it is, you can't help but emphasize the way you are feeling. It sounded like it could be used as lyrics, but overall, it was very nice and it reminded me of one of my own poems that someone told me sounded like a Taylor Swift song. Lol


  • stop a bullet
    May 31

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    such an emotional and deep poem. i love the way you'er so open with your feelings, and you can tell that you really care about whoever you wrote this poem about. very cute and sweet


  • ladybug.
    May 30

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    I feel this is very cliche, but at the same time, you gave it a unique twist. The rhyming is pretty great, so kudos there. The poem as a whole is very good.


  • Antebellum
    May 28
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    I think of you every morning when i wake up and every night
    I know sometimes i can be hard to handle and very up-tight
    But i promise you one thing that will never change is that I Love You
    I know we both will make mistakes but i know we will pull through

     

    Really like this. the rhymeing here is amazing.

    great write


  • misticmoonlite gold member
    May 23

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    lovely entry, all love has to do is smile and we kneel to its grips, thank you for joining in
    Linda

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