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See the blood in the creeks

See the blood in the creeks
See the oil that flows in the riverine
See the blood on my people’s cheeks
See their moil and toil in the rivermine

See the blood in the creeks
See the flood on the lands
See the blood as wicked man seeks
See their sea foods demise by the delta lands

See the blood in the creeks
See the peace never so freaks
See the blood in our soldiers’ hands
See their wars of greed in the Niger lands

See the blood in the creeks
See the true peace no one ever seeks
See the blood in the hands of the Meeks
See their blood that make God to speaks


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  • Mummytobe
    May 17

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    This was well written. I liked how you repeated See the/their it was amazing. I'm glad to have read this.