You say my words melt your heart
That my thoughts penetrate your soul
My eyes consume you
You were mine from the start
My arms hold you tight
Kiss you softly
You snuggle closer
Kissing my chest
Feeling your heart beat quicken in pace
The sweat begins to bead
I can feel your love and
You’re inner struggle
Laying in a bed
Holding each other tight
Kissing with rising passion
That heats up the night
Come to me gently
And hold me true
Never let my heart go
Our love will continue to grow
Please tell me what you think
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Emotive. There is a hint of desperation in the poem that comes out.
Cheers
Sandy
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I like this poem. it has a lot of love and passion. i can tell it comes from the heart. keep it up.
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Love the poem...such enthusiasim
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this was so full of emotion it was so moving there was a sadness in the passion that was consistant thrgouh the whole piece which i really enjoyed
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i like it alot. ( close eyes thinking of my boyfriend) hold me close and never let go. i cry at night so please don't leave my side . i get scard that he will come back and beet me. so hold me tight just let me cry kiss me on the neck on the head and all over i love you so much please just lock the windows and the doors im tierd baby im cold to so hold me tight pull the blankets hight and sweet whispers of goodnight.
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