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Never Again

If I could rewrite this ending,
I would do it all over again.
You look so beautiful,
But suddenly fade into the blackest grays.
I want nothing more than to know you,
And never forget again.


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  • Mummytobe
    May 17

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    wow this was just amazing.
    It's short but to the point.
    You've got this great talent.
    I could never write anything
    short and to the point like this.