Why must this pain continue?
I hate all that you've done to everyone.
Watch as they cry, with no one to
wipe away their tears.
I hope you you're happy for what
you did, because my anger is boiling
beneath the surface. Want a redo?
Too Late!
Don't even bother coming near me
or my friends. If you think forgiveness
is near then your sadly mistaken, its
the exact opposite.
Take your lies and disappear to your
dark and dreary hellhole. My only
regret: that i even knew you.
A contest entry
- prewrite conest by serenity silvermoon.
1500 points, ended June 12, 429 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please give your honest opinion. thanks
Comments
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Well this is direct and emotional and well what else could one really ask for in poetry? and if you must really know in life too!
I like it, I like it so!
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Shakespear said,"Revenge is a dish best served cold"
I love the way the emotions overflow in this poem. It's brilliant. I can feel them. The words create an amazing picture.
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awesome!!!
thought that this was pretty good 
alot of emotion and anger in your words. keep up the good work!!!!
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ok this sounds like me lmao
& 
or it kinda sounds like some guy too....
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