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My confessional

My confession

We've been running in this circle
For almost five years now
It isn't getting anywhere
But I know it's not a waste

I'll tell you how I feel
But you don't trust it
How can you trust me
When I chose a pint over seeing you

Your mind is made up
I know this
But alas I try

You've just stuck to my soul.

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